Sunday, August 8, 2010

Rural dawn

Having a field day
Gobbling up the juicy worms
Are the early birds


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10 comments:

  1. Awwww so sweet. This Haiku is really too cute. Gobbling up the juicy worms..haha..Love it! :D

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  2. The early bird catches the first worm!!
    Nice Haiku!! :)

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  3. Love the descriptive visula of "gobbling"! Love how your haiku refreshes a well known maxim!

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  4. i love your interpretation :) juicy worms .. ewww :D

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  5. hi magiceye,
    what a lovely take on the topic! :)

    good one! :D

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  6. Early worm too must be happy to be the early prey..didn't have to go through the agony of long wait before the inevitable end..

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  7. magic eye... so so sweet... do stop by Someone Is Special's Field.

    Yours Frendly,
    Someone Is Special

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