Friday, March 18, 2011

Nature's fury

The earth – it shook

disgusted at the abuse

and washed itself

with waves of sea water

mindless of the

destruction that it would wreak.

The point of tolerance

had been breached

and the time had come

to remind the tenants

of this beautiful earth

‘No more, Mr.Nice Guy.

This is, but a sample.

Take care’.



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11 comments:

  1. Magiceye...
    Fantastic story in lieu of the tragedy.
    Great Job on the 55!!
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  2. yes we do need to take care...i would like to think the tragedy was not premeditated...

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  3. this happens once in a while,
    nature wants us to stay alerted
    the way we see a crocodile,

    lovely capture of the event.
    amazing poetry.
    enjoyed your treat in 55 words.

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  4. Very interesting take on the earth shaking and purging.

    Mysteries we cannot fathom on this sphere indeed.

    Better days ahead.

    And love for all.

    xoxo

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  5. We still don't learn our lesson.

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  6. WOW!! Powerful! We are better off not infuriating her... whheew! We've done enough of that already!

    Very well written, magiiceye

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  7. its a brilliant exploration by just 55words...powerful yes..

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  8. a poem in 55 words! you're my hero

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  9. keep it up.

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    Cheers.
    Happy Writing..
    xx

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