Tuesday, June 29, 2010

Aged

It lay on its side
Like a discarded toothbrush
No longer bristling


For Magpie Tales

8 comments:

  1. ouch, a chilling place to be...hope i am never 'it'. nice magpie. simple yet pointed...

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  2. A nice haiku ... I love its simplicity, few words say a lot.

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  3. Oh dear and now I am scared :)

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  4. or wanting to rid the world of dirt and disease!
    So apt.

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  5. I am afraid to lay on my side...bkm

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  6. I have never been good at haiku although I did win that home server - which I sold to an Indian gentleman from the technology industry in the Silicon Valley for
    $300!

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