Friday, June 25, 2010

Seen unseen

The solitary ray of sunlight shone on her face. There was a teardrop forming in her left eye, waiting to drip if she blinked. Raging thoughts kept her awake.
Zero tolerance the mantra.
His catlike movements had gone unnoticed, he thought.
The blind see in darkness.
He felt a tear drop as he gasped.

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8 comments:

  1. Very nice and wonderfully expressed :)

    Keep writing!!

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  2. I could "see" and "feel" both Peeps in this really well-written "55". thank you!

    For mine, GO HERE

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  3. Love it when words creat strong visuals. My 55 is HERE .

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  4. Very Descriptive...
    very nicely done...
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    Thanks for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  5. First time here I loved the story as GMan says it was very descriptive. I like it when their like that. Will see you next week just follow the link below.


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    Thanks For Reading.

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