The solitary ray of sunlight shone on her face. There was a teardrop forming in her left eye, waiting to drip if she blinked. Raging thoughts kept her awake.
Zero tolerance the mantra.
His catlike movements had gone unnoticed, he thought.
The blind see in darkness.
He felt a tear drop as he gasped.
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Very nice and wonderfully expressed :)
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Excellent 55 My Friend.
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Thanks For Reading.
awesome 55.
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