The solitary ray of sunlight shone on her face. There was a teardrop forming in her left eye, waiting to drip if she blinked. Raging thoughts kept her awake.
Zero tolerance the mantra.
His catlike movements had gone unnoticed, he thought.
The blind see in darkness.
He felt a tear drop as he gasped.
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A day trip to Brighton, England
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Very nice and wonderfully expressed :)
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Excellent 55 My Friend.
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awesome 55.
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