Friday, September 10, 2010

Forever

The feeling of emptiness
Reminds of the space that is yours.
A sombre silence fills it now
But the moment I enter the space
Memories jostle for attention
Each one so unique
Of a time we spent together
And of times we spent apart.
I have moved on
so has the world
But you remain.



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17 comments:

  1. an intriguing write..to find them still in that space...but for someone who has moved on you thought enough to go there...smiles. nice 55.

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  2. A lot of philosophizing going on here...
    Loved your story MagicEye!
    Excellent 55 My Friend
    Thanks for your point of view!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

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  3. You put so much emotion into 55 words - amazing. And there are some people who simply never leave our lives no matter how long they are absent. I loved this!

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  4. The space never fills up. Its reserved forever.

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  5. Wow....so very poignant. I love this...memories, pain, remorse...yet the one remains. Excellent.

    Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!

    Have a super weekend.

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  6. That was a touching one! Loved the poignancy of the words.

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  7. In silence is our truth spoken Here's my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well

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  8. I'm reminded of a line fromthe song "Entre Nous" by Rush: "The spaces in-between leave room for you and I to grow"

    I'm still trying to figure out why some of the words in your 55 were turned into links. (Perhaps if I could actually pop-up the links, it might make sense)

    Have a great weekend!

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  9. We can never forget, but we can move forward as you have written here. A fine 55. Mine is also up.

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  10. Some memories...some people are Eternal part of your system.

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  11. Beautifully written, 55er

    We have no choice but to move on, for such is life, but the memories we get to keep in our hearts forever.

    Joanny
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

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  12. great 55,
    u moved on, yet the other remains...
    beautifully put 55.


    my 55

    Happy Belated Friday!

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