The feeling of emptiness
Reminds of the space that is yours.
A sombre silence fills it now
But the moment I enter the space
Memories jostle for attention
Each one so unique
Of a time we spent together
And of times we spent apart.
I have moved on
so has the world
But you remain.
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an intriguing write..to find them still in that space...but for someone who has moved on you thought enough to go there...smiles. nice 55.
ReplyDeleteA lot of philosophizing going on here...
ReplyDeleteLoved your story MagicEye!
Excellent 55 My Friend
Thanks for your point of view!
Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G
oh so wistful. nicely done.
ReplyDeleteIt's so hard to move on.
ReplyDeletereally nice 55
ReplyDeleteVery touching, Dee.
ReplyDeleteYou put so much emotion into 55 words - amazing. And there are some people who simply never leave our lives no matter how long they are absent. I loved this!
ReplyDeleteThe space never fills up. Its reserved forever.
ReplyDeleteWow....so very poignant. I love this...memories, pain, remorse...yet the one remains. Excellent.
ReplyDeleteHere's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!
Have a super weekend.
That was a touching one! Loved the poignancy of the words.
ReplyDeleteIn silence is our truth spoken Here's my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well
ReplyDeleteI'm reminded of a line fromthe song "Entre Nous" by Rush: "The spaces in-between leave room for you and I to grow"
ReplyDeleteI'm still trying to figure out why some of the words in your 55 were turned into links. (Perhaps if I could actually pop-up the links, it might make sense)
Have a great weekend!
We can never forget, but we can move forward as you have written here. A fine 55. Mine is also up.
ReplyDeleteSome memories...some people are Eternal part of your system.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, 55er
ReplyDeleteWe have no choice but to move on, for such is life, but the memories we get to keep in our hearts forever.
Joanny
http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/
thoughtful
ReplyDeletewords
great 55,
ReplyDeleteu moved on, yet the other remains...
beautifully put 55.
my 55
Happy Belated Friday!