Friday, September 10, 2010

Forever

The feeling of emptiness
Reminds of the space that is yours.
A sombre silence fills it now
But the moment I enter the space
Memories jostle for attention
Each one so unique
Of a time we spent together
And of times we spent apart.
I have moved on
so has the world
But you remain.



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17 comments:

  1. Brian MillerSeptember 10, 2010 at 6:45 AM

    an intriguing write..to find them still in that space...but for someone who has moved on you thought enough to go there...smiles. nice 55.

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  2. G-ManSeptember 10, 2010 at 6:58 AM

    A lot of philosophizing going on here...
    Loved your story MagicEye!
    Excellent 55 My Friend
    Thanks for your point of view!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End....G

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  3. limeSeptember 10, 2010 at 7:42 AM

    oh so wistful. nicely done.

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  4. KBSeptember 10, 2010 at 7:46 AM

    It's so hard to move on.

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  5. clean and crazySeptember 10, 2010 at 7:51 AM

    really nice 55

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  6. PurbaSeptember 10, 2010 at 8:05 AM

    Very touching, Dee.

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  7. TALONSeptember 10, 2010 at 9:25 AM

    You put so much emotion into 55 words - amazing. And there are some people who simply never leave our lives no matter how long they are absent. I loved this!

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  8. A Daft Scots LassSeptember 10, 2010 at 1:55 PM

    The space never fills up. Its reserved forever.

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  9. Hootin AnniSeptember 10, 2010 at 2:41 PM

    Wow....so very poignant. I love this...memories, pain, remorse...yet the one remains. Excellent.

    Here's Mine. Yes, I finally did one...long time no see!!!

    Have a super weekend.

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  10. zephyrSeptember 10, 2010 at 4:31 PM

    That was a touching one! Loved the poignancy of the words.

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  11. John (@bookdreamer)September 10, 2010 at 8:11 PM

    In silence is our truth spoken Here's my Friday 55. Hope your week goes well

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  12. BubbaSeptember 10, 2010 at 10:23 PM

    I'm reminded of a line fromthe song "Entre Nous" by Rush: "The spaces in-between leave room for you and I to grow"

    I'm still trying to figure out why some of the words in your 55 were turned into links. (Perhaps if I could actually pop-up the links, it might make sense)

    Have a great weekend!

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  13. Monkey ManSeptember 10, 2010 at 11:11 PM

    We can never forget, but we can move forward as you have written here. A fine 55. Mine is also up.

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  14. MonaSeptember 10, 2010 at 11:51 PM

    Some memories...some people are Eternal part of your system.

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  15. joannaSeptember 11, 2010 at 12:43 PM

    Beautifully written, 55er

    We have no choice but to move on, for such is life, but the memories we get to keep in our hearts forever.

    Joanny
    http://thedowsersdaughter.blogspot.com/

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  16. smSeptember 11, 2010 at 1:00 PM

    thoughtful
    words

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  17. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallSeptember 12, 2010 at 2:40 AM

    great 55,
    u moved on, yet the other remains...
    beautifully put 55.


    my 55

    Happy Belated Friday!

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