Monday, March 7, 2011

Wintry vibes

When the wamth has gone

The relationship shrivels

As the cold sets in.


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16 comments:

  1. A picture with the poem would have been really nice. Considering the brilliant pictures you put up.

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  2. as amropali says, i agree.
    loved it,

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  3. A relationship is like a plant, it needs constant nurturing.

    Beautiful haiku.

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  4. disagreeing with the above two :) I thought your haiku spoke loud & clear, even without the image.. sad, yet wonderful, thoughts Magiceye!

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  5. So very true but the cold can thaw too and bloom and blossom like spring in action!!
    Lovely winter vibes !!and thought provoking!!

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  6. Nice to read something pertinent to real life!

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  7. honestly, i have never seen a more perfect metaphoric winter haiku than this one!!

    Very well written!

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  8. lovely.. my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

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  9. Shiveringly truthful.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/hallowed-feet/

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  10. Greetings!

    Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25,

    week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry

    And hope to see you in shortly…old poems are welcome!

    xoxox

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