Monday, March 7, 2011

Wintry vibes

When the wamth has gone

The relationship shrivels

As the cold sets in.


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16 comments:

  1. Geeta SinghMarch 7, 2011 at 12:47 PM

    hmm well said

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  2. AmropaliMarch 7, 2011 at 4:21 PM

    A picture with the poem would have been really nice. Considering the brilliant pictures you put up.

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  3. PaulamiMarch 7, 2011 at 4:28 PM

    as amropali says, i agree.
    loved it,

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  4. PurbaMarch 7, 2011 at 7:38 PM

    A relationship is like a plant, it needs constant nurturing.

    Beautiful haiku.

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  5. Vinay Leo R.March 7, 2011 at 7:38 PM

    disagreeing with the above two :) I thought your haiku spoke loud & clear, even without the image.. sad, yet wonderful, thoughts Magiceye!

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  6. NankaMarch 8, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    So very true but the cold can thaw too and bloom and blossom like spring in action!!
    Lovely winter vibes !!and thought provoking!!

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  7. RallentandaMarch 8, 2011 at 4:34 PM

    Nice to read something pertinent to real life!

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  8. RMarch 8, 2011 at 6:25 PM

    beautifully written :)

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  9. Shalmalee....March 9, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    So true!

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  10. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 9:54 AM

    agree.

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  11. KavitaMarch 9, 2011 at 2:46 PM

    honestly, i have never seen a more perfect metaphoric winter haiku than this one!!

    Very well written!

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  12. bendedspoonMarch 9, 2011 at 6:16 PM

    haiku so true!keep warmth :)

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  13. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 7:58 PM

    lovely.. my potluck- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/nectar-from-heaven/

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  14. AnonymousMarch 9, 2011 at 8:18 PM

    Shiveringly truthful.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2011/03/08/hallowed-feet/

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  15. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 10, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    welcome..

    lovely piece,
    A++

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  16. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 14, 2011 at 7:09 AM

    Greetings!

    Thanks for the lovely contribution to potluck on week 25,

    week 26 is open NOW, we treasury your poetry

    And hope to see you in shortly…old poems are welcome!

    xoxox

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