The earth – it shook
disgusted at the abuse
and washed itself
with waves of sea water
mindless of the
destruction that it would wreak.
The point of tolerance
had been breached
and the time had come
to remind the tenants
of this beautiful earth
‘No more, Mr.Nice Guy.
This is, but a sample.
Take care’.
Magiceye...
ReplyDeleteFantastic story in lieu of the tragedy.
Great Job on the 55!!
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
yes we do need to take care...i would like to think the tragedy was not premeditated...
ReplyDeletethis happens once in a while,
ReplyDeletenature wants us to stay alerted
the way we see a crocodile,
lovely capture of the event.
amazing poetry.
enjoyed your treat in 55 words.
And oh how we abuse her...
ReplyDeleteVery interesting take on the earth shaking and purging.
ReplyDeleteMysteries we cannot fathom on this sphere indeed.
Better days ahead.
And love for all.
xoxo
We still don't learn our lesson.
ReplyDeleteWOW!! Powerful! We are better off not infuriating her... whheew! We've done enough of that already!
ReplyDeleteVery well written, magiiceye
its a brilliant exploration by just 55words...powerful yes..
ReplyDeleteWell written.
ReplyDelete55 words - good job.
a poem in 55 words! you're my hero
ReplyDeletekeep it up.
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Cheers.
Happy Writing..
xx