Friday, March 25, 2011

Sometimes...

I look over my shoulder

And see my past fading.

Is it my memory

or is it my eyesight.

I wonder.

I look ahead

And see the mist blur it.

Is it the moisture

In the air

Or in my eyes.

I wonder.

Should I go ahead

Or wait for clarity.

I wonder.

Life sucks.



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16 comments:

  1. Beyond HorizonMarch 25, 2011 at 2:40 PM

    AH! Lifes' biggest question?

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  2. AnyaMarch 25, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    So so touching words
    and so the truth .....
    Love it :)

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  3. Alka GurhaMarch 25, 2011 at 3:36 PM

    On a lighter note....we dont fall off because life sucks...

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  4. AnonymousMarch 25, 2011 at 4:15 PM

    so change your lenses!(yeah, the world is full of smartasses)
    seriously though, very well written.

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  5. Brian MillerMarch 25, 2011 at 4:33 PM

    go forward...backward is a black hole...

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  6. PaulamiMarch 25, 2011 at 5:51 PM

    life is an oft repeated drama we all live through it.. lucidity is tough to capture..

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  7. G-ManMarch 25, 2011 at 8:17 PM

    ...and then you die!
    Loved your insightful observation My Friend.
    Excellent 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 25, 2011 at 10:41 PM

    stay tuned, enjoy what you do.

    Happy Friday.
    loved your reflective 55.

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  9. Steve IsaakMarch 25, 2011 at 11:20 PM

    Solid, good/telling-not-showing verses.

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  10. PurbaMarch 26, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Beautifully penned...not sure whether I liked the last line.

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  11. gautami tripathyMarch 26, 2011 at 10:36 PM

    Life does not suck, We make it so...


    Here is mine:
    homing

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  12. AashiMarch 27, 2011 at 12:58 AM

    so close...yet sometimes its not really so...

    lovely nonetheless :)

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  13. AashiMarch 27, 2011 at 12:59 AM

    so close...yet sometimes its not really so...

    lovely nonetheless :)

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  14. S.R.AyyangarMarch 27, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Some times we are struck on cross roads like this!

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  15. zephyrMarch 27, 2011 at 12:00 PM

    Nicely worded. But I think life provides mystery and hope instead despair at least as we look ahead.

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  16. monika bakshiMarch 29, 2011 at 2:35 PM

    SO profound! awesome

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