The heat charred the skies
Which then melted
And poured, after the
Thunder and lightning.
The rains pulled down the
High summer temperatures
And brought the aroma
Of fresh moist earth.
Heavenly it is, the ambiance,
For a singer to burst out in song
And the dancer to do a jig
The monsoons have arrived!
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We just had our version of a monsoon here to break our heat. Great 55.
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Beautiful imagery.
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ReplyDeleteTerrific description of the Joy of Rain Relief
I loved your 55.
Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End
We're experiencing that wonderful cool down brought by the rains right now. Great 55!
ReplyDeletei would do a jig, i love a good storm...though a monsoon sounds a bit intense...
ReplyDeleteWhy only the dancer? Everyone feels like doing a jig when the temperatures and tempers cool down :)
ReplyDeleteOne day it was sunny and 84, the next, thunder, lightning and 3" of rain. Monsoon sounds refreshing, right?
ReplyDeletewell you express the vital joy of your land!
ReplyDeleteNamaste & Aloha from Waikiki :)
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ReplyDeleteOf fresh moist earth....
I bet this aroma can beat any perfume in the world.
Its just re freshening and infuses a sense of happiness inside.
love monsoon !!!
Even after so many years, i feel like being a kid to welcome the first rain :) nice poem!
ReplyDeleteNice vivid descriptions from the heat to the monsoons. I could picture everything.
ReplyDeleteGood use of spirited description, effective work.
ReplyDeleteNicely described!
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