Friday, June 18, 2010

Ongoing culture conflict - 4

The song created a peaceful ambiance.
Gulmohurs were in full bloom.
Love was in the air.
The sun was hidden behind layers of dark clouds.
Rain arrived in a drizzle.
The umbrellas were not opened.
Getting drenched was fun.
And then the ideating cyclone struck .
Namdeo wrote furiously.

He heard them laugh.

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  1. We don't get cyclones - just lots and lots of rain. And we have Songkhran for fun with water.

  2. nice one.. but wud like to know what namdeo wrote also :)

  3. @Bikramjit... shall be revealed in the next episode ;)

  4. a wonderful moment you to dance in the rain myself...i am sure he was inspired...until next time..

    nice 55. mine is up!

  5. Magic Man.....
    Fantastic 55 My friend.
    This was a Great example of creativity.
    Thank you so much for playing, thanks for visiting, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

  6. Quite a picture you write here in your 55. Inspiration comes from many sources. My 55 is HERE .

  7. @Alice.. to ideate is to conceive ideas or to think hence an ideating cyclone would mean a voluminous rush of ideas

  8. Hey Deepakji,
    Are you commited to that writer's challenge or something? This piece was very novel..IS a 55er and a part of a continiued story too..How creative!! keep 'em comin'..:) All the best